The TG Reaper Pt. 1

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Warning:  Most of this story is typed up using a small cellphone, and some parts typed late at night!

___________The TG Reaper Pt 1!_______

"Jason, oh Jason!  I'm coming for you!" An ominous voice calls out.   "Who's there, what do you want?"  Jason asks... no reply is heard.   "What the hell, am I hearing things?"   Jason asks himself.

He continues to walk along the sidewalk, which was dimly lit by old lamp posts  situated several feet apart and could only see a few yards out where you could only see a few silhouettes of different objects(benches, bushes, trees, playground, ect.) inside the old park during the dead of night.  In the darkness, ominous eyes continue to following Jason's evey step with eyes glowing an eerie shade of red, unbeknownst to Jason.

"Jason!  Where are you going Jason? I wanna have a little fun!"  The voice returns as Jason suddenly stops upon hearing the voice again.  "Who's there?" Jason asks.  "If you're trying to scare me, you can stop trying.  You ain't gonna scare me, I'm the toughest guy in my school!  Nothing will scare me, you hear me?"  Jason said with confidence.  'Damn it, should've known something like this'll happen.  It says this place is haunted, but it can't be.  This park may be old, but nothing has really happened here minus a few brawls that I've heard about and done myself.'  Jason thinks to himself.

"Hahahaha! We shall see, young mortal!  You've never met a terror so frightening.   Ahahahaha!"  The eerie voice shouted with an ominous laughter booming throughout the darkness.

"Holy shit!"  Jason stumbles a bit after being surprised by the creepiness of the voice that suddenly boomed from the darkness.    "Who are you?" Jason asks.   "Why are you doing this, did that prick Bryan put you up to this?   Your best bet is to beat it and stop your BS, before I find you and kick your ass!"  Jason shouted.

Jason looks around, trying to find the source of the voice.  All of a sudden, Jason sees red glowing eyes peering from the darkness.  "What the hell is that?"  Jason said, and then picks up rock and throws it at the set of glowing eyes.   "Get out of here you f'ing prick!  Your little tricks won't work!"   Jason demanded.  However, the eyes stayed put.  Not moving, but seem to grow even redder.  Then Jason sees a good size stick by his feet and picks it up.  Chucking it towards the glowing red eyes, but Jason sees it pass through the pair of eyes as if they weren't actually there.

"What the?  Was that some kind of illusion of some sort?"  Jason asks.  All of a sudden , the eyes disappear.   "Whoa , that was freaky!   Maybe I should leave, this is creeping me out."  Jason stated.

He started walking with a quicken pace trying to hurry out of the park; but then stops just as quick when he sees the glowing, red eyes again.  Straight in front of him a few yards up, he then sees a shadowy, silhouette of a man with those same glowing eyes.

"Heh.  Didn't your mother tell you not to throw things at others?   It's very rude, young mortal.   Hahahaha!"  The ominous figure says.  "Who are y...?"  Jason tries to say, but stops speaking as the figure suddenly disappears without a trace.  "Who in the...w-wh-what's going on here?"  Jason stammered.  Starting to get very nervous about the situation.

Just then, Jason feels a presence behind and stands there shaking a bit.  Then hears the voice say "What's the matter, not scared are you?  Hehehehe.  And I do believe you droped these."  A rock and stick lands by his feet and then feels an ominous hand touch him.   Jason spins around and starts swinging wildly but notices that there isn't anyone there but sees the exact same rock and stick he threw moments ago, which would impossible to find in that pitch, black area.    "Ok, screw this.  I'm leaving, I ain't dealing with... *gasps*..."  Jason started to say when he felt a hand on his shoulder.   "You're leaving, so soon?" The voice called out.   Jason then turns around and sees the same figure from before, but now sees his face and notices it to be a skeleton with red eyes with an eeriely darker glow, and wearing a tattered, black robe.    "You ain't leaving till I have my fun" the figure said.

"Holy SHIT!"  Jason shouts, frightened by the figure's demonic, almost deathly, appearance. And then he starts running the other way, truly frighten by what he'd seen.  Fearing fot his life, believing the figure to be death itself.

"Ahahahahahaha!   That's right, run.  Run till you can't run anymore, but I'll still getcha in the end.  No one shall escape my grasp!"  The figure exclaimed in a booming voice, towards his victim to hear.   "You are making this exciting, plus I could use a good magical workout.  So run a bit and I'll catch up when you least expect it.   Bwahahahahaha!"

Jason continues to run for his life, hoping that demon wasn't still chasing him.   "...*huff*... *huff*... Damn, why is this happening to me?   Whar did I ever do to deserve this?"  Jason asked himself. "Oh man, I'm exhausted!   I need to rest a bit on that bench up ahead."   Jason then stops by the bench and rests a bit, hoping whoever...erm..  whatever that was stopped chasing him.

However, the demonic being was actually a few yards behind him; watching him with a boney smirk.  'Hehehe!  Poor guy, so frightened from just my appereance; so scared,  like a little rabbit that was cornered by a big, strong predator!  So much fun, it's been too long since I had this much much fun.   Hmm, I got a great idea.  Hahahaha!'   The figure said with an evil laugh, and disappeared into the darkness to continue his fun.

"..*huff*... *huff*...    Damn, I'm still exhausted.   I need a drink of water, or something!"  Jason said, still exhausted from running.

"Here you go!  You look a little tired, and could use some water!"  Said the strange voice, handing Jason a bottled water.  "Thanks mate!"  Jason takes the water from him, too exhausted to noticing who the man was.  Jason then gulps down the water, and lays the bottle next to him.   "Ahhhhh!  That hit the spot, thanks again for the... *gasps*..."  Jason said, but stops speaking as he notices who it was.

"Hahahahaha!  You're welcome young mortal!"  As the man was none other than the demon, tha has been chasing him for a couple of hours.  "I can't have you passing out from exhaustion so soon!  Hehehehe!"   Jason then gets up and backs away, but then trips over a stick laying in the middle of the sidewalk.   " Whoa.... umph... Oww, that hurt!"  Jason said painfully.   "Why was that stick right there,  and placed exactly where I could trip over it.  Who would leave this.... *gasp*..."  Jason said, but stopping mid sentence.  Noticing that the stick was the same one from before.   "What the hell?"

"Need to watch your step, young mortal!  That could have been a nasty fall, you could have twisted your ankle!   Hahahaha!"  The demonic figure proclaimed with an evil chuckle.   "And isn't that your bag beside you?"  The figure pointed, with a boney finger, at the bag sitting beside.

"What the hell!  I thought I left that in my car?"  Jason said, very confused and scared.  "Why.. How did that...?"  Jason couldn't figure out why it was there or how it got there?!

"Hmm, but why is it pink?  A bit girly don't you think?  Not judging you, since I know you kids have some weird tastes in fasion!"  The demonic figure pointed out, as Jason notices his bag turning a very pink color!    "..*gasps* ... How did you.. Why is it... What's going on?"  Jason said, shaking in fear.  "Who ...what are..  Why are you doing this to me.. How did you....?"   Jason said, not knowing who this demon was.

"Oh my, full of questions aren't we?"  The figure said with an ominous tone.  "Well who I am.. You can just call me Jacks.  And what I am.. Hmm,  what's the best way to describe it... Similar to a Reaper, but so much more.  And no, before you ask, I'm not here for you soul.   Think I'm  Freddy Krueger or something.  And as far as what I'm gonna do to you, well there's no joy in telling you just yet.  I need you to broil in torment and bake in the fright you are , and will, experience; and I'll savor your every torturous moments!  Bwahahahaha!"  Jacks said, with a demonic laugh.

Jason was too frighten to move, staring wide eyed at the demon standing there with an evil, boney grin.  "Hehehehehe!  Tonight's going to especially delicious, and you're gonna be my main course!"  Jacks said, savoring the moment; and then places his hands on his victim's and absorbs something from him!  "...*touch*...  And you might want to start running now!"

Jason feels a tingle as the demon touches his shoulder.  And then starts shaking,  "You.. You're gonna.. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!"  Jason stammers as he gets up and starts running away from this monster.   "Ahhhhhhhh, HE'S GONNA EAT ME!"   Jason ran as fast he can, trying to escape from his this evil being.  Fearing that he may be devoured if he stayed.

Jacks just watches as his victim runs in terror.  " *Pfft*  Now that interesting to watch, and that little bit I ate was delicious!  Although that was just some appetizers, I'm still waiting on the main course!" Jacks proclaimed as he continues to slowly walk, giving poor Jason a fighting chance, well more like a cat playing with a mouse.   "Hehehehe, that's right!  I'm gonna eat you, but not like you think; cause ready or not Young Mortal, HERE I COME!" Jacks said with demonic intentions, laughing evilly all the way!     "BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

END OF PART 1!

----______   TO BE CONTINUED    _______----


I'll be working on Part 2 of this story for a good bit, but I'd love to hear comments about this story or at least to which ever point I've gotten to.  (Note that I'm still working on the next part, and this will eventually become one of my main stories I may/will be writing.   Also, don't steal my stories or use 'em without permission.  Just ask, and I may let you use 'em however just as long you give me credit for this story, no more/ no less than that.)   And excuse me for the bad/foul language; but it is a story afterall.

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dannyman658's avatar
Nice opening.  Only problem I note is a typo:

"Hehehehe, that's right!  I'm gonna eat you, but not like you think; cause ready or not Young Mortal, HEAR I COME!"

Should be here instead of hear.